tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8480722245142888883.post4770334830334243745..comments2013-10-17T15:22:32.184-08:00Comments on Shanna Goes Digital: Data Analysis #2Shanna Allenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08822837366248767633noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8480722245142888883.post-4060823927589884252013-10-17T15:22:32.184-08:002013-10-17T15:22:32.184-08:00I Like the attention you payed to the fact the eve...I Like the attention you payed to the fact the even online, that the teens brought their language out of the standard vernacular. I think that potentially because, as you have mentioned, the majority of the teens interacting in this space are very academically minded, and interested in impressing the adults in their life, that they might be more conscious of what they are saying, than say a teen who is just sliding by. <br /><br />I would like to at least see the conversation thread that you examined. Also I would have liked to see more analysis as opposed to just a summary. <br /><br />Overall, good job. : ) Larshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12624819985126135561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8480722245142888883.post-75084545615529799152013-10-17T12:57:55.171-08:002013-10-17T12:57:55.171-08:00I love the idea of looking at the hybrid identity,...I love the idea of looking at the hybrid identity, specifically looking at the change in vernacular depending on the presence of different ages, gender, and age. How does it affect the crafting of their online identity. I think this would be a great focus for observation and would generate some I agree with Professor Stone, I would love to see the data and observe this slight change in how the language shifted depending on the presence of adults. Overall, I see a lot of potential in your findings and look forward to some examples of this in the future. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8480722245142888883.post-60255515331573660972013-10-14T10:11:12.047-08:002013-10-14T10:11:12.047-08:00Shanna--It would be helpful to see the data that y...Shanna--It would be helpful to see the data that you generated (changing or blurring out the names, of course). It's interesting that you noticed that they change their language if adults are involved in the conversation. What is an example of this? How can you explain it in terms of the relationship between identity and language? Like your other data memo, I'd like to see much more development of your analysis. How can you use your data to illustrate your claims. You will need to weave quotes from the data throughout your discussion as evidence.Jennifer Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06366094915607807513noreply@blogger.com